background by lady horse and knight texture and photoshop birds and gems are psd files of mine crown on knight is a psd file but I can't remember who I got it from, if anyone recognizes it, let me know
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EDIT: I tried to do what suggest in her nice critique. I'm not sure I accomplished it so much but at least I tried
2nd EDIT: also sent me to a tutorial, so I applied some of those effects as well
3rd EDIT: gave some constructive critique and so I darkened the bottom of the dress, fixed a bit of the sleeves to give a more edgy look and tried to fix the birds so that they don't look like they're floating
Interesting composition. The blending of textures, colors, and the overall tone of the image give it a historic feel. The painterly texture works well. The figure of the lady is placed realistically in the scene and the perspective and blending give it a dreamy quality. I just notice the two birds to the right of the image; a metaphor? -Love birds? This is a nice touch. The knight in the background seems a little out of real perspective which is a bit unsettling but, perhaps this is intentional too. After my initial reaction, I like the effect. Back to the birds (and this is because I know these things): one of the birds appears to be brown headed cowbird [link] not the best choice because they are a nesting parasite. Although the subtle color may have been intentional, perhaps a dash of color with a true love bird like a cardinal would have been more effective. Overall a very nice effort.
Overall I really love this piece. Hence the fav! The detail is wonderful. The overall feel is full of romance and fantasy. I love how well you blended the jewelry, it looks so natural like she was already wearing it all. There are only a couple things I would critique. I feel like the edges of the woman are a little... muddy, I guess is how I would describe them. A little blurry, not very crisp... I feel more like she's fading than blending I guess. The birds also don't feel like they're blending very well. Maybe a few leaves in front of them would help. And finally I feel like the picture is a little out of balance. I just feel like the woman and the knight are a little close together. It might help to move the lady to the right a little? Anyway, I truly love the tone you've created and none of my critiques are distracting overall. Wonderful work!
Lovely work, Lori .. I love the color tones in this piece, so earthy!
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